Difference between revisions of "Talk:Rachel Sartori"
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* Nice job, The structure of this piece flows nicely. | * Nice job, The structure of this piece flows nicely. | ||
| + | * You did an awesome job conveying the idea of selective content sharing and you explain this very well throughout the piece. I love how you explain that Snapchat is mostly private and you allows you to convey you online presence in a simply non-language based manner. | ||
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whereas if I posted in this on a more words focused platform | whereas if I posted in this on a more words focused platform | ||
-Shane Levine | -Shane Levine | ||
Revision as of 00:46, 21 February 2018
Macro
- Nice job, The structure of this piece flows nicely.
- You did an awesome job conveying the idea of selective content sharing and you explain this very well throughout the piece. I love how you explain that Snapchat is mostly private and you allows you to convey you online presence in a simply non-language based manner.
whereas if I posted in this on a more words focused platform -Shane Levine
