Difference between revisions of "Talk:Rachel Kaufman-Levine"
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Reading your data profile was really interesting! I liked the added detail of how your last name makes it easy for your data to be associated to you and no one else. The RocketReach results were an interesting find. Finding out if making an account really does give your full phone number without paying would help flesh out your discovery of your online identity. Adding more images to your page would make the reading more engaging and would give readers more visuals of what you've found. | Reading your data profile was really interesting! I liked the added detail of how your last name makes it easy for your data to be associated to you and no one else. The RocketReach results were an interesting find. Finding out if making an account really does give your full phone number without paying would help flesh out your discovery of your online identity. Adding more images to your page would make the reading more engaging and would give readers more visuals of what you've found. | ||
I'm wondering if there is anything else about you on the internet. Did you find any articles from high school or any information not on a people-searching site? If so, that discovery would be helpful to add. If there isn't any other information about you out there, more discussion on why you think that is and how you feel about it would help your argument. Overall, this is a great start to your data identity profile! | I'm wondering if there is anything else about you on the internet. Did you find any articles from high school or any information not on a people-searching site? If so, that discovery would be helpful to add. If there isn't any other information about you out there, more discussion on why you think that is and how you feel about it would help your argument. Overall, this is a great start to your data identity profile! | ||
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| + | I liked the way you put emphasis on the fact that you have a unique name and how that might contribute to people being able to find information about you easily. That seems to be your theme and it shows up throughout your article. One big thing to look at overall is that you list everything that you find from a Google search and in the data broker report, but you don't spend much time analyzing that data. What does it mean to someone who is searching your name? What would someone think of you just from looking at your online profile? Consider why some of the information was wrong. Maybe it is in how often they update your profile on those sites. In your conclusion, work on tying everything back to your name being so unique rather than saying that you enjoyed learning about what is out there. Your RocketReach and Pikdo images could also be bigger because I'm not able to read what they say. Good job! | ||
Latest revision as of 22:06, 26 February 2020
Review from Laura McCallum:
Reading your data profile was really interesting! I liked the added detail of how your last name makes it easy for your data to be associated to you and no one else. The RocketReach results were an interesting find. Finding out if making an account really does give your full phone number without paying would help flesh out your discovery of your online identity. Adding more images to your page would make the reading more engaging and would give readers more visuals of what you've found. I'm wondering if there is anything else about you on the internet. Did you find any articles from high school or any information not on a people-searching site? If so, that discovery would be helpful to add. If there isn't any other information about you out there, more discussion on why you think that is and how you feel about it would help your argument. Overall, this is a great start to your data identity profile!
Brady Hicks
I liked the way you put emphasis on the fact that you have a unique name and how that might contribute to people being able to find information about you easily. That seems to be your theme and it shows up throughout your article. One big thing to look at overall is that you list everything that you find from a Google search and in the data broker report, but you don't spend much time analyzing that data. What does it mean to someone who is searching your name? What would someone think of you just from looking at your online profile? Consider why some of the information was wrong. Maybe it is in how often they update your profile on those sites. In your conclusion, work on tying everything back to your name being so unique rather than saying that you enjoyed learning about what is out there. Your RocketReach and Pikdo images could also be bigger because I'm not able to read what they say. Good job!
