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== Review from Laura McCallum: ==
Rachel,
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Reading your data profile was really interesting! I liked the added detail of how your last name makes it easy for your data to be associated to you and no one else. The RocketReach results were an interesting find. Finding out if making an account really does give your full phone number without paying would help flesh out your discovery of your online identity. Adding more images to your page would make the reading more engaging and would give readers more visuals of what you've found.
 
Reading your data profile was really interesting! I liked the added detail of how your last name makes it easy for your data to be associated to you and no one else. The RocketReach results were an interesting find. Finding out if making an account really does give your full phone number without paying would help flesh out your discovery of your online identity. Adding more images to your page would make the reading more engaging and would give readers more visuals of what you've found.
 
I'm wondering if there is anything else about you on the internet. Did you find any articles from high school or any information not on a people-searching site? If so, that discovery would be helpful to add. If there isn't any other information about you out there, more discussion on why you think that is and how you feel about it would help your argument. Overall, this is a great start to your data identity profile!
 
I'm wondering if there is anything else about you on the internet. Did you find any articles from high school or any information not on a people-searching site? If so, that discovery would be helpful to add. If there isn't any other information about you out there, more discussion on why you think that is and how you feel about it would help your argument. Overall, this is a great start to your data identity profile!

Revision as of 01:14, 18 February 2020

Review from Laura McCallum:

Reading your data profile was really interesting! I liked the added detail of how your last name makes it easy for your data to be associated to you and no one else. The RocketReach results were an interesting find. Finding out if making an account really does give your full phone number without paying would help flesh out your discovery of your online identity. Adding more images to your page would make the reading more engaging and would give readers more visuals of what you've found. I'm wondering if there is anything else about you on the internet. Did you find any articles from high school or any information not on a people-searching site? If so, that discovery would be helpful to add. If there isn't any other information about you out there, more discussion on why you think that is and how you feel about it would help your argument. Overall, this is a great start to your data identity profile!