Talk:Rachel Joyce

Peer Review 1

I think overall you made a genuine effort to analyze your Facebook profile, noting both the positive and negative aspects. I feel like you went beyond just noting some basic reasons as to why your Facebook has less information than in previous years. You actually stepped back and took a look at how you’ve changed as a person, and how that has affected your online portrayal.I like how you looked at both the larger picture of your timeline, but also smaller, specific elements, such as the absence of one of your friends in particular on your timeline. The use of a graph as one of your pictures in the “Lack of Content” section is a nice addition. It further proves the points you discussed under the same section.
One criticism I have is the lack of information under your “Likes” section. I think this has great potential, especially since you’ve admitted that your “Likes” section most closely identifies with the “real you.” There is an opportunity to discuss why you chose to portray yourself through that section, but not as much in the other sections of your profile.
- Marisa Lamberty