Talk:Priyanka Khetarpal

I enjoyed reading your statement, especially since I could relate right away with your parents warning you about what you put on the internet. It was interesting that you brought up using different Google accounts for distinct purposes (as I didn’t think about that as much when thinking about my presence).

Your reflection and conclusion both bring up good points about whether one’s activity on social media or lack thereof comes at a cost. Also, describing yourself as more of an absorber versus producer of information was another interesting point. It would be beneficial to bring in some outside sources on these subjects or include some kind of graph image on global/national social media usage (the Global Digital Report 2019 should have this). I could see this argument being fleshed out even more throughout the statement.

Overall your writing tone and structure both worked well in terms of being easy to read and also in painting a picture of your search process and reactions to the results. Adding 2-3 images would also help with the illustration of your statement.

Best,
Natalie Lampa (nlampa)