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| + | Good Job with the page layout. Clear concise sections throughout the page make it really easy to follow and read through. It has the feel of a wiki article too, which I like. Most of what you say is straight to the point, just delivering the facts about what needs to be conveyed, without extra sentences or words that may detract from the overall point. As far as the content goes, I think you make excellent points about how your page is authentic to yourself, but in order for people to get to know you, they really need to meet you in person. Also, cool “mini-bio” picture in the top right of the page. Nice work. – Kevin Jensen | ||
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Hey Phil, I'll break down my comments based on each section:
Introduction: I really like your introduction. You preface your experiences of social networks by noting your past history of Xanga, MySpace, and now Facebook. While you aren't an avid Facebook junky, you curate your Facebook in order to keep a balanced and representative avatar of your genuine identity. I also enjoy your sidebar bio thumbnail. It's decorative, informative, and draws the reader in.
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Good Job with the page layout. Clear concise sections throughout the page make it really easy to follow and read through. It has the feel of a wiki article too, which I like. Most of what you say is straight to the point, just delivering the facts about what needs to be conveyed, without extra sentences or words that may detract from the overall point. As far as the content goes, I think you make excellent points about how your page is authentic to yourself, but in order for people to get to know you, they really need to meet you in person. Also, cool “mini-bio” picture in the top right of the page. Nice work. – Kevin Jensen
