Talk:Paula Luput

Comment from Kierra Davis

Hi Paula, The writing style and format you chose was unique and engaging. I think it worked effectively to really describe what sort of information a person would see about you online, and what they might interpret from that information, as just a random viewer. I liked the little details you included for the future year 2055 and MyCelf. This fictional technology was a good way to showcase your thesis of whether it's better to have all of the current information about people on the internet.

I have a good idea of what information you found about yourself online, but maybe you could add a few more statements to clearly explain how accurate you felt the information was, or what kind of person someone would think you are based on this information. I would also suggest trying to connect that information with your thesis a little more deeply. Overall, I liked the creative format you used and it portrays an interesting story!