Talk:Noah McGuire

Mutaman Alnaseri's Comment

Hello there Noah McGuire,

It is becoming harder and harder to maintain personal information on the internet. I think what you've written so far really vibes with the idea that companies will go far and wide to try and find out who you are. I liked how you pointed out that in regards to that end, companies are even willing to make up information about you based on the incomplete bits that they have just so they can feel like they have a more complete profile of you.

That aside, I think you could've done more in regards to discussing your online data identity. For the most part, you talked about what you found online when looking up your name using different search queries. Then, you proceeded to talk about what kind of identity this information paints you as. However, I feel that there is a lack of direct comparison between your public data identity relative to the real you. Although I picked up on some implicit comparisons, I think dedicating a section to talking about how accurate, complete, and stable your online data identity is to your real self could improve your writing.