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You did a great job in talking about how a common name helps you to stay hidden online and It might be helpful to include a snapshot of how many Nicolas Taylor there are. I really like the picture you have uploaded, and I believe the question mark is from google saying “did you mean Nicholas”. You could include a caption on the picture to make it more relevant. Also, I really like the idea you have in the conclusion on data privacy and I feel it could be beneficial to add a paragraph or two and tie it up to one of the readings. | You did a great job in talking about how a common name helps you to stay hidden online and It might be helpful to include a snapshot of how many Nicolas Taylor there are. I really like the picture you have uploaded, and I believe the question mark is from google saying “did you mean Nicholas”. You could include a caption on the picture to make it more relevant. Also, I really like the idea you have in the conclusion on data privacy and I feel it could be beneficial to add a paragraph or two and tie it up to one of the readings. | ||
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| + | Nicolas, I found your online data identity report to be interesting. I liked how you kept it in a narrative form. I also liked how your introduction gave a very solid to overview of what was to come. As far as revisions, I believe that it could be more beneficial to connect your report to the class concepts more. I feel like this could be worked in a way that deals with your very interesting Beenverified report. Connected to class concepts will also possibly help you fill in more on the real vs. digital divide that seems like it is such a large part of this assignment. You also give a very short reason as to why you cant be found. This does make sense, but try focusing on how your practices online have have influenced your data identity. Good Luck! | ||
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Latest revision as of 22:06, 26 February 2020
Keshav Gupta Comments:
Hi Nicolas, I really enjoyed reading your data identity report. I think it is helpful that you explained the common misunderstanding google has with your name and how that turns out to be not as unique as you thought it is. Your reading is really engaging and I really liked the part where you talk about what all BeenVerified constructed on your identity. You could further talk about why you think BeenVerified added all these things to your data.
You did a great job in talking about how a common name helps you to stay hidden online and It might be helpful to include a snapshot of how many Nicolas Taylor there are. I really like the picture you have uploaded, and I believe the question mark is from google saying “did you mean Nicholas”. You could include a caption on the picture to make it more relevant. Also, I really like the idea you have in the conclusion on data privacy and I feel it could be beneficial to add a paragraph or two and tie it up to one of the readings.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Nicolas, I found your online data identity report to be interesting. I liked how you kept it in a narrative form. I also liked how your introduction gave a very solid to overview of what was to come. As far as revisions, I believe that it could be more beneficial to connect your report to the class concepts more. I feel like this could be worked in a way that deals with your very interesting Beenverified report. Connected to class concepts will also possibly help you fill in more on the real vs. digital divide that seems like it is such a large part of this assignment. You also give a very short reason as to why you cant be found. This does make sense, but try focusing on how your practices online have have influenced your data identity. Good Luck!
-Steven Allred
