Talk:Mutaman Alnaseri

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Hi Mutaman! I really enjoyed reading your data identity profile from the perspective of someone who has been very meticulous of privacy. I think this is a really interesting example of how no matter how hard we may try, there is still information that is ascertainable simply by being a student. You really explained how surface level your data identity goes with the use of false dates of birth, temporary email, and more, noting that perhaps if someone tried hard enough and knew where to gather all your information, they could understand more about you. Additionally, I thought adding the search in Arabic was an interesting perspective that really emphasized how self-contained you have kept your “real” self. In terms of writing, your statement flowed well and gave me adequate background first for the understanding of the attitude you have for privacy. -Caroline Tuohy


Hey there, Mutaman. Great work! I think the introduction was a good tone setter as it really drives in how important privacy is to you. The privacy section specifically was interesting because while many people may know about safe online practices, it's admirable that you actually use them. You do a good job talking about the search results, like about what comes up and why it did, but I think more about your data identity could be addressed. Your profile is very centered around your primary concern (privacy), so you could add more about other circles of online identity, like any social media, even if addressing that means just saying you don't have any! Knowing the boundaries of your data identity would help the reader form a more accurate picture of it (i.e. where your data identity ends rather than just some places it exists). Overall, your data identity profile was a good and the general flow made it very easy to read. -Tony Wang