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| + | Michelle- I've just now clicked on your finished page for the first time and i immediately laughed at your 'reaction to seeing snow for the first time'. My first impression is excited to read, due to your titles, and hilarious picture. You're so cute and I can see this come through in your language! | ||
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| + | Knowing you, I'm not 100% surprised you were so late to the party getting on to social media. You're lucky, you don't have your middle school life recorded. This is sad for me though, because I can't go look at embarrassing photos. Good though, because you can portray the real you accurately, without an old, and more immature self to replace. I think having a fb since junior year though will show enough growth but I can't help feel a loss without seeing 2009 you. | ||
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| + | In your introvert/extrovert section, I think it may be beneficial to talk about posts you have made, like a recent status or photo. For example I resisted from posting my university of Michigan acceptance on facebook, because everyone was doing it. Maybe you could expand on the reasons for specific posts you have chosen to post, and how that shapes your introverted self on facebook. Maybe add a couple profile pictures since you actually do post those. | ||
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| + | I loved your addition in 'out of character' and I did read it on facebook and enjoyed it! I think including this really helped define yourself as a non-frequent facebook user, but also let the reader know more about you. Overall It was a great read and I enjoyed it! | ||
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Revision as of 13:10, 31 March 2016
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Hello Michelle! Just saving a spot to comment on your avatar autobiography! I'm excited to read it! - Meera
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Michelle- I've just now clicked on your finished page for the first time and i immediately laughed at your 'reaction to seeing snow for the first time'. My first impression is excited to read, due to your titles, and hilarious picture. You're so cute and I can see this come through in your language!
Knowing you, I'm not 100% surprised you were so late to the party getting on to social media. You're lucky, you don't have your middle school life recorded. This is sad for me though, because I can't go look at embarrassing photos. Good though, because you can portray the real you accurately, without an old, and more immature self to replace. I think having a fb since junior year though will show enough growth but I can't help feel a loss without seeing 2009 you.
In your introvert/extrovert section, I think it may be beneficial to talk about posts you have made, like a recent status or photo. For example I resisted from posting my university of Michigan acceptance on facebook, because everyone was doing it. Maybe you could expand on the reasons for specific posts you have chosen to post, and how that shapes your introverted self on facebook. Maybe add a couple profile pictures since you actually do post those.
I loved your addition in 'out of character' and I did read it on facebook and enjoyed it! I think including this really helped define yourself as a non-frequent facebook user, but also let the reader know more about you. Overall It was a great read and I enjoyed it!
Hailey
