Talk:Michele Gee

Comment by Flannery O'Donnell:

Michele,

I thought that overall, you did a great job on this assignment. The writing flowed nicely, the photos were well chosen, and your writing style was strong. I really liked how you focused in on one part of your identity and its online presence: professionalism. It was interesting how your professional identity was much of what was represented on your google searches. I think it would be interesting if, in your revision, you discussed whether this was a complete representation of what you view as your "real self."

Additionally, I think this would be an even greater piece if you incorporated another course concept. One suggestion I have is to tie in some concepts from Oliver Haimson's article "Authentic Facebook Identity" in the section where you discussed your social media presence. You brought up authenticity in this section, and I think Haimson's article would connect nicely here. Just a suggestion, but, overall, really nice job.