Talk:Maya Balaji

Emily Fischer's Comment

I really enjoyed your post! It seems as though you were able to find a decent amount of information about yourself. It's really cool that the first link that appears when you Google your name is your Facebook. I also liked the way you discussed the two versions of yourself. I think most people can relate to that, and it was interesting to hear your take on the idea. You talked about the "lack of control" you have over your online identity, which I also thought was a cool analysis. However, the images you embedded in the article don't show anything! I wish I could see them, because I'm sure they would've made your post even better. Also, I think the organization could be redone a bit. Many of the headers contain the term "Online Identity," and I think your article would gain some clarity if you differentiated between these a little. Additionally, I think you could use some readings to back up your analysis/the idea of being unable to control your online identity. Overall, I think you did a really great job and I enjoyed reading what you wrote!