Talk:Matthew Greenbaum

Matt,

I liked how you compared Evolver to other software that excels and handles avatar creation. Although the tools found in both The Sims 2 and Oblivion are far superior to that of Evolver, it seems as though you left out how these outside sources shaped or affected the creation of your avatars. You do demonstrate your frustrations very clearly throughout your entry however I feel as though you are missing how it ties into the avatar.

I enjoyed following your creation process of your avatars. You conveyed a great play-by-play of each feature, how you went about settling on each one and the pro's and con's of the software itself. I was hoping for a connection to an outside source in the first paragraph in the "Ideal" Avatar selection possibly adding thoughts or reflections. Further, I was looking for a particular reason as to why you arrived at the fantasy avatar you did instead of stemming off and creating one that looks nothing like you.

- H Long