Difference between revisions of "Talk:Mark Buckner"
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| − | I like how you formatted the article with each primary element of your Facebook profile given its own section for discussion, although you did forget to talk about any of your other pictures besides your current profile picture. The tone for the article was pretty serious with occasional humorous quips at the "disingenuous nature of the Facebook game" that really helped to drive your point home about the self-awareness needed for an online persona to be genuine in the slightest. Each section contains sufficient information about each element of your Facebook profile and why you have it like that except for the Statuses section. Since you claim this to be "the largest way [you] construct [your] identity via Facebook" I would like to know a little bit more about your typical status update or comment on a friend's status. | + | I like how you formatted the article with each primary element of your Facebook profile given its own section for discussion, although you did forget to talk about any of your other pictures besides your current profile picture. The tone for the article was pretty serious, with occasional humorous quips at the "disingenuous nature of the Facebook game" that really helped to drive your point home about the self-awareness needed for an online persona to be genuine in the slightest. Each section contains sufficient information about each element of your Facebook profile and why you have it like that, except for the Statuses section. Since you claim this to be "the largest way [you] construct [your] identity via Facebook," I would like to know a little bit more about your typical status update or comment on a friend's status. |
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-Vince Zobel | -Vince Zobel | ||
Revision as of 21:56, 20 November 2012
Peer Review 1
I like how you formatted the article with each primary element of your Facebook profile given its own section for discussion, although you did forget to talk about any of your other pictures besides your current profile picture. The tone for the article was pretty serious, with occasional humorous quips at the "disingenuous nature of the Facebook game" that really helped to drive your point home about the self-awareness needed for an online persona to be genuine in the slightest. Each section contains sufficient information about each element of your Facebook profile and why you have it like that, except for the Statuses section. Since you claim this to be "the largest way [you] construct [your] identity via Facebook," I would like to know a little bit more about your typical status update or comment on a friend's status.
-Vince Zobel
