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| − | Comment from Nico Figueroa: | + | Comment from Nico Figueroa: Hey Maggie! I really enjoyed your writing, the methodology of splitting up your online presence is a great way to illustrate your main idea of companies (and the whole internet) never really having a full picture of who we are. I think you cover a few very important topics: biases in data, data collection and the importance of privacy. You do a phenomenal job of describing how your internet presence is technically accurate but not necessarily representative, which is very interesting. |
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| + | I just have one piece of feedback that I hope could be helpful: It might be useful to the reader to segment the Data Policies and Data Identities sections a little bit with sub headers, just to have an easy way to contextualize the writing that is coming up. I think you could benefit from it the most under Data Policies where you talk about the different sub-topics in your article. | ||
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| + | Overall, I really enjoyed reading your article, the main idea is provocative and supported by years of social media usage which is awesome. | ||
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| + | Great article, thanks for sharing! | ||
Revision as of 15:55, 23 February 2021
Comment from Nico Figueroa: Hey Maggie! I really enjoyed your writing, the methodology of splitting up your online presence is a great way to illustrate your main idea of companies (and the whole internet) never really having a full picture of who we are. I think you cover a few very important topics: biases in data, data collection and the importance of privacy. You do a phenomenal job of describing how your internet presence is technically accurate but not necessarily representative, which is very interesting.
I just have one piece of feedback that I hope could be helpful: It might be useful to the reader to segment the Data Policies and Data Identities sections a little bit with sub headers, just to have an easy way to contextualize the writing that is coming up. I think you could benefit from it the most under Data Policies where you talk about the different sub-topics in your article.
Overall, I really enjoyed reading your article, the main idea is provocative and supported by years of social media usage which is awesome.
Great article, thanks for sharing!
