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Hi Lina, similar to what David said, I think you have a really good foundation for a great data profile. It’s always very interesting to see whether someone with a relatively common name is able to find themselves on the internet. I think the only thing you need to do now is to take what you’ve found and written and expand on it. I think it would be really helpful to talk about yourself and your stance on information privacy. In addition, you may find something cool if you dig a little deeper into the image that you found in the fashion site and maybe speculate why that picture is on the site if you don’t remember ever posting it. Towards the end, you talked about how the internet is really scary and you could strengthen that claim tying it back with your own experience such as that picture. What might also be interesting is looking at the flip side of having a relatively common last name and talking about the other results you found and what you think about them. Overall, I loved the way you structured your profile, all you need to do is to build on it and you should have a really cool profile! | Hi Lina, similar to what David said, I think you have a really good foundation for a great data profile. It’s always very interesting to see whether someone with a relatively common name is able to find themselves on the internet. I think the only thing you need to do now is to take what you’ve found and written and expand on it. I think it would be really helpful to talk about yourself and your stance on information privacy. In addition, you may find something cool if you dig a little deeper into the image that you found in the fashion site and maybe speculate why that picture is on the site if you don’t remember ever posting it. Towards the end, you talked about how the internet is really scary and you could strengthen that claim tying it back with your own experience such as that picture. What might also be interesting is looking at the flip side of having a relatively common last name and talking about the other results you found and what you think about them. Overall, I loved the way you structured your profile, all you need to do is to build on it and you should have a really cool profile! | ||
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| + | Lina, I think you have great topic sentences for each of your categories in your wiki page. However, I would elaborate more on the details of each of your findings. For example, did you find more on your google search than your data broker findings? Which were more accurate? Given the you have all of these online profiles, were you able to easily find these on the first page of your google search? Or did you have to go on multiple pages? I think can make your paragraphs a little stronger by first stating experience then elaborating on your thoughts regarding these experiences and what you think it of if it will change your viewpoint or your actions online. Lastly, I would include one more image to support and make your page more visually appealing. Overall, great job. | ||
Latest revision as of 19:41, 19 February 2020
David Schindler Comment
Hi Lina. I think you have the start of a very interesting data profile. It seems like you did get your data profile and It is very cool that with such a common name you were able to easily find your photography website and social media sites. Also it is scary that instant checkmate knows home addresses even registering multiple houses. In general though you need to write more about your discoveries. Go into how finding this stuff made you feel, If it is accurate of your identity and what exactly your view on privacy is. I do think you found a decent amount of information, so just go into more detail about what you found, how you relate to it and this post will be golden. Your style of writing flows well and is easy to read, you just need more of it!!
Anish Raparla Comment
Hi Lina, similar to what David said, I think you have a really good foundation for a great data profile. It’s always very interesting to see whether someone with a relatively common name is able to find themselves on the internet. I think the only thing you need to do now is to take what you’ve found and written and expand on it. I think it would be really helpful to talk about yourself and your stance on information privacy. In addition, you may find something cool if you dig a little deeper into the image that you found in the fashion site and maybe speculate why that picture is on the site if you don’t remember ever posting it. Towards the end, you talked about how the internet is really scary and you could strengthen that claim tying it back with your own experience such as that picture. What might also be interesting is looking at the flip side of having a relatively common last name and talking about the other results you found and what you think about them. Overall, I loved the way you structured your profile, all you need to do is to build on it and you should have a really cool profile!
Jess Kim Comment
Lina, I think you have great topic sentences for each of your categories in your wiki page. However, I would elaborate more on the details of each of your findings. For example, did you find more on your google search than your data broker findings? Which were more accurate? Given the you have all of these online profiles, were you able to easily find these on the first page of your google search? Or did you have to go on multiple pages? I think can make your paragraphs a little stronger by first stating experience then elaborating on your thoughts regarding these experiences and what you think it of if it will change your viewpoint or your actions online. Lastly, I would include one more image to support and make your page more visually appealing. Overall, great job.
