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I thought you made some really thoughtful analysis about the way you approach your Facebook persona and what is and isn't shared on your page. I really liked the section about trust and the way that trust within your network affects your decision to share certain things. I feel like that's not necessarily something that I think of too much when posting things on Facebook as the audience that I really care about is only a small subset of my friends. As such, I thought it was interesting to read about your perspective in this regard because it's not something that I have thought about before. I thought your tone was a little on the academic side and could have been loosened a little while still incorporating ideas from the readings. Additionally, just in terms of structure it might have been nice to break your analysis into a few more sections for aesthetic reasons as your paragraphs/sections were on the long side. Overall, greatly enjoyed your reflection on your online presence! | I thought you made some really thoughtful analysis about the way you approach your Facebook persona and what is and isn't shared on your page. I really liked the section about trust and the way that trust within your network affects your decision to share certain things. I feel like that's not necessarily something that I think of too much when posting things on Facebook as the audience that I really care about is only a small subset of my friends. As such, I thought it was interesting to read about your perspective in this regard because it's not something that I have thought about before. I thought your tone was a little on the academic side and could have been loosened a little while still incorporating ideas from the readings. Additionally, just in terms of structure it might have been nice to break your analysis into a few more sections for aesthetic reasons as your paragraphs/sections were on the long side. Overall, greatly enjoyed your reflection on your online presence! | ||
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Revision as of 20:25, 31 March 2017
Hi Lauren,
I thought you made some really thoughtful analysis about the way you approach your Facebook persona and what is and isn't shared on your page. I really liked the section about trust and the way that trust within your network affects your decision to share certain things. I feel like that's not necessarily something that I think of too much when posting things on Facebook as the audience that I really care about is only a small subset of my friends. As such, I thought it was interesting to read about your perspective in this regard because it's not something that I have thought about before. I thought your tone was a little on the academic side and could have been loosened a little while still incorporating ideas from the readings. Additionally, just in terms of structure it might have been nice to break your analysis into a few more sections for aesthetic reasons as your paragraphs/sections were on the long side. Overall, greatly enjoyed your reflection on your online presence!
Best, Dylan
