Talk:Kunal Singh

Hi, Kunal. I enjoyed reading your Data Identity report. I think it is helpful that you explained that your name is popular in a different region of the world because there are millions of people who have the same name as you. Continuing, you stated that you had to conduct a targeted search. I think this all plays into the shield you discussed and you can consider tieing The Shield and Targeted Search into one section. I like the aspect of a shield. There is also an actress with the same name as I have and I didn’t really think of it as a shield. I thought of it more as a curtain because I could still be found if using my full name (including my two last names). I think you used a great analogy! There were a few grammar errors that I came across and I would recommend using Grammarly. It's a free tool that helps with spelling and punctuation. I enjoyed reading from section to section because you would include a bit of a transition such as "As mentioned in above, simply searching my name will do you no good" and "...my name, year of birth, and state were not enough to garner a specific enough profile (more on that later)" This helps set up the reader for what they are getting themselves into. Great job.

-- Carol Castro