Talk:Kevin Wang

Hi Kevin, Reading your autobiography, your voice seemed to come through strongly, in a way that was amusing to read while bringing clarity to your writing. Looking at the organization, the initial titles provided a good map for understanding what you’re currently or going to be talking about. However, while reading the So What DO You Do On Facebook? section, the transition didn’t seem as clear when you moved to talking about your Facebook Banner even though the organizational transition makes sense. Your discussion of audience and privacy in the creation of your online profiles is an interesting insight to the way that you present yourself in different contexts. I particularly enjoyed how you ended the But What About Newgrounds? section, highlighting how public and private contexts, with strangers or friends, affects your willingness to participate. The comparison of your Facebook presence to your Newgrounds presence makes an interesting point further about your theme. However, it felt like your analysis of your online identity’s connection to your offline identity stayed primarily in the initial paragraph. Overall though, I thought that your avatar did a good job of looking at how you represent yourself online and why do you what you do!

Best, Lauren