Talk:Kevin Lee
Hi Kevin,
I really enjoyed reading your article! I like how you talk about multiple identities throughout the paper such as your birth name, your name after coming to America, and your online username which can be linked to your reddit, and video game accounts. Having the picture of Kevin Lee the fighter really stands out and draws attention to your paper. One suggestion that I would try to make the transition a little bit more smooth from when you are talking about your facebook identity to your reddit identity, as I was slightly confused reading that portion. I would also try to add other photos that could help keep the readers attention later on in the paper. Overall I really liked this! Good job!
-Samarth Sarin
Nicolas Taylor Comment:
Great work on this piece, Kevin. I appreciated how you began to set up the theme right off the bat in the introduction. I really liked how you give background and more information on why finding yourself in a google search is next to impossible. I think adding that kind of discussion on why the data broker report didn't find much on you would add to the piece. Also, I'd like to see more in the conclusion about how you feel about your data footprint and if you think that is very important to you. Great use of the picture and tying that back to what you wrote about. Overall, great job!
Hi Kevin,
This is a good data identity statement! You talked about your unique name situation because of immigration. And such a change may hide you from google search and data broker report. You also talked about your viewpoint in activities on Google, Facebook, etc. I found that you quite pay attention to the equality of data sharing and the accordance of online data and personal life. I would like to see more about your perspective about the privacy issue. How do you think about privacy? Are you satisfy with the result of your search? How do these results may influence your academic and personal life? By adding these topics, I believe that the statement will become more comprehensive.
--Yunhao Wang
