Talk:Kevin Lee

Hi Kevin,

I really enjoyed reading your article! I like how you talk about multiple identities throughout the paper such as your birth name, your name after coming to America, and your online username which can be linked to your reddit, and video game accounts. Having the picture of Kevin Lee the fighter really stands out and draws attention to your paper. One suggestion that I would try to make the transition a little bit more smooth from when you are talking about your facebook identity to your reddit identity, as I was slightly confused reading that portion. I would also try to add other photos that could help keep the readers attention later on in the paper. Overall I really liked this! Good job!

-Samarth Sarin

Nicolas Taylor Comment:

Great work on this piece, Kevin. I appreciated how you began to set up the theme right off the bat in the introduction. I really liked how you give background and more information on why finding yourself in a google search is next to impossible. I think adding that kind of discussion on why the data broker report didn't find much on you would add to the piece. Also, I'd like to see more in the conclusion about how you feel about your data footprint and if you think that is very important to you. Great use of the picture and tying that back to what you wrote about. Overall, great job!