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Hi Kathryn - First of all I just want to say that I loved your writing! Your tone of voice and depth of thought really showed throughout the entirety of your piece. For example, I liked your analogy of how each post was a puzzle piece that still didn't really form a cohesive representation of who you were. Adding onto that, I thought you took a really interesting approach in looking at ''why'' you weren't posting instead of what you were posting in spite of the fact that you do have a Facebook. Toying with your feeling of "obligation" was also a unique dynamic to analyzing your avatar. I think this showcased how the norms apparent on social media truly did affect your engagement in that you felt obliged to post even if you didn't want really want to. If I had any constructive criticism, I would say to review your final thoughts section. You say that you aren't going to change your ways for anybody, yet a big focus of your biography was about the obligation you felt to post on faceboook, so I felt some misconnection here. Though overall, I really enjoyed this inside perspective of your representation on facebook, and you did a really strong job in your analysis - Great job! | Hi Kathryn - First of all I just want to say that I loved your writing! Your tone of voice and depth of thought really showed throughout the entirety of your piece. For example, I liked your analogy of how each post was a puzzle piece that still didn't really form a cohesive representation of who you were. Adding onto that, I thought you took a really interesting approach in looking at ''why'' you weren't posting instead of what you were posting in spite of the fact that you do have a Facebook. Toying with your feeling of "obligation" was also a unique dynamic to analyzing your avatar. I think this showcased how the norms apparent on social media truly did affect your engagement in that you felt obliged to post even if you didn't want really want to. If I had any constructive criticism, I would say to review your final thoughts section. You say that you aren't going to change your ways for anybody, yet a big focus of your biography was about the obligation you felt to post on faceboook, so I felt some misconnection here. Though overall, I really enjoyed this inside perspective of your representation on facebook, and you did a really strong job in your analysis - Great job! | ||
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| + | I really enjoyed your article. Much like yourself, I do not like posting every aspect of my life on social media so i could relate to many of your reasonings behind not using Facebook frequently. I really liked the section where you explained your reasonings behind posting each picture. I found it intriguing at your realization of feeling obliged in updating your friends and family on what you are up to despise your lack of interest in using Facebook. I also like how you still show your presence online by using other features other than just statuses. For example, although you do not post many pictures or statuses you still like other peoples statuses. This could also show up on the newsfeed of your relatives informing them that you are okay. Facebook does a great job on displaying what people look like throughout the years but cannot accurately depict who they are as a person. Great job! | ||
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Hi Kathryn - First of all I just want to say that I loved your writing! Your tone of voice and depth of thought really showed throughout the entirety of your piece. For example, I liked your analogy of how each post was a puzzle piece that still didn't really form a cohesive representation of who you were. Adding onto that, I thought you took a really interesting approach in looking at why you weren't posting instead of what you were posting in spite of the fact that you do have a Facebook. Toying with your feeling of "obligation" was also a unique dynamic to analyzing your avatar. I think this showcased how the norms apparent on social media truly did affect your engagement in that you felt obliged to post even if you didn't want really want to. If I had any constructive criticism, I would say to review your final thoughts section. You say that you aren't going to change your ways for anybody, yet a big focus of your biography was about the obligation you felt to post on faceboook, so I felt some misconnection here. Though overall, I really enjoyed this inside perspective of your representation on facebook, and you did a really strong job in your analysis - Great job! - Abbey Warren
Hi Kathryn I really enjoyed your article. Much like yourself, I do not like posting every aspect of my life on social media so i could relate to many of your reasonings behind not using Facebook frequently. I really liked the section where you explained your reasonings behind posting each picture. I found it intriguing at your realization of feeling obliged in updating your friends and family on what you are up to despise your lack of interest in using Facebook. I also like how you still show your presence online by using other features other than just statuses. For example, although you do not post many pictures or statuses you still like other peoples statuses. This could also show up on the newsfeed of your relatives informing them that you are okay. Facebook does a great job on displaying what people look like throughout the years but cannot accurately depict who they are as a person. Great job! - Erick
