Difference between revisions of "Talk:Julie Burke"

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This is a great read! I love how you incorporated three different forms of social media and analyzed how you present yourself to the different audiences of Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter. Will comment more... - Caroline Gilhool

The things we talked about are very similar so I think it would be good to comment on this piece. Will comment more later. - Vincent Rogers

I love the way that you started off your writing - it was intriguing and less daunting because of how short and concise your first two lines are. I also like the clarity of your headings, because I know exactly what I’m going to be reading about. I also really enjoyed how you started off with your perception of yourself outside of social media, because it allows me as a reader to compare and contrast with your social media identity as I read the rest of your piece.

In your Facebook section, you mentioned that you had grown up around Facebook and been a social media user for as long as you could remember, so I would have liked to read more about the evolution of your Facebook identity. You did this very well in your Instagram section, and it both made me understand the evolution of your social media identity better, and felt very relatable. The pictures that you included of your Instagram before and after definitely reinforced the points that you were making.

I really liked how you summarized your identity of each social media platform in the last sentences of each individual section. I found myself going back and reading the three sentences during your conclusion to remind myself of what you had dubbed your identities for the separate platforms. You had a solid conclusion and I loved reading your piece! - Hope Chen