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| + | I enjoyed reading about your online avatar - I think you put in a lot of interesting and relevant content that gave me a lot of insight on your Facebook presence and identity. I thought it was very unique that you chose to portray your online identity and your real identity through two different names, Julia and jujupiepie, and it was a cool way to distinguish between the two identities. I also thought that the inclusion of so many screenshots and pictures definitely aided the sections of content you wrote. Organization wise, I understand that you broke down the content into separate sections that each discussed a different topic about your avatar; however, I did feel that the overall structure could have been more clearly organized. For example, a section about your real self, a section about your online identity, and maybe some subsections divided under those two main sections that further discussed details regarding each one. I would have also liked to read a little about the ties between your online and real self and how much of jujupiepie really reflects Julia Cheng, maybe in a separate section at the end. From what you have written, I can definitely tell what jujupiepie is like - that she is a happy, carefree, yet somewhat reserved and private person online - but how much of that stems from the real Julia Cheng and why? Overall, your article was detailed and informative and written in a casual and easy-to-read style which I really liked! | ||
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Revision as of 21:38, 20 November 2012
Hi Julia,
I enjoyed reading about your online avatar - I think you put in a lot of interesting and relevant content that gave me a lot of insight on your Facebook presence and identity. I thought it was very unique that you chose to portray your online identity and your real identity through two different names, Julia and jujupiepie, and it was a cool way to distinguish between the two identities. I also thought that the inclusion of so many screenshots and pictures definitely aided the sections of content you wrote. Organization wise, I understand that you broke down the content into separate sections that each discussed a different topic about your avatar; however, I did feel that the overall structure could have been more clearly organized. For example, a section about your real self, a section about your online identity, and maybe some subsections divided under those two main sections that further discussed details regarding each one. I would have also liked to read a little about the ties between your online and real self and how much of jujupiepie really reflects Julia Cheng, maybe in a separate section at the end. From what you have written, I can definitely tell what jujupiepie is like - that she is a happy, carefree, yet somewhat reserved and private person online - but how much of that stems from the real Julia Cheng and why? Overall, your article was detailed and informative and written in a casual and easy-to-read style which I really liked!
Emily
