Talk:Joseph Tingle

Brady Hicks

Your article does a good job of staying on the topic of you being concerned about what information is out there for anyone to see. One thing to work on is that in the beginning, you say there was a lot of public information online about you and that it concerned you, and you stick with that through most of the article. Then at the end you say you weren't surprised at what all was out there which seems like a contradiction. I think your article would benefit from talking about what comes up with a Google Images search and including some of those images in your article. Another thing would be to consider comparing your online presence to the real you. Your "Thoughts on Identity Results Online" section could benefit from an analysis of how true the information is that is out there. There were also many grammar errors that made it hard to read and distracted from the flow of the article.

Alexandra Cortez

I really like the structure of your article. It does a good job of outlining what you will be talking about and laying out your different areas of online identity in an easily digestible format and language. I also like how you speculated as to why you found certain information about yourself and why other pieces of info weren't present. I felt a little weird about the way you wrote in present tense (ie: "I am now looking at..."). Just because it's a wiki page and this page is going to go through several iterations, it seems like it doesn't fit well. I also think that using class readings to interpret your findings is a good idea as well as including some visuals either of your findings or things that might represent them.