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Great job on your post. You did a good job on relaying what was available on yourself online, and even gave some thoughts as to why there may not be that much available. That made the post more interesting to read and I appreciated that. I particularly liked the final section where you tied it all together, but I would like even more in there. In depth, how do you feel about what is available about you online. Building off that, you mention that you like to keep social media presence to a minimum, but I think this piece would benefit from you discussing more about why that is. Overall, great job on the post-- its been one of the best I've read so far.

Latest revision as of 22:03, 26 February 2020

Hi John,

I enjoyed reading your data profile and found it interesting that you were not able to find too much information about yourself considering you share a last name with a member of the Beatles. You mentioned that you do not really use social media other than for professional uses, and it seems you are mostly successful keeping your online identity as private as you can. The lay-out of the post is organized and makes it easy to follow each topic. The pictures you included add some nice context to the post, but I think you should try to include at least one insight from the weekly readings and perhaps provide your take on how ethics play a role in what data is available about you. Great post overall!

David Forystek


Nicolas Taylor's comment

Great job on your post. You did a good job on relaying what was available on yourself online, and even gave some thoughts as to why there may not be that much available. That made the post more interesting to read and I appreciated that. I particularly liked the final section where you tied it all together, but I would like even more in there. In depth, how do you feel about what is available about you online. Building off that, you mention that you like to keep social media presence to a minimum, but I think this piece would benefit from you discussing more about why that is. Overall, great job on the post-- its been one of the best I've read so far.