Talk:Jeremy Stark

Comment from Kirk Turrentine

Jeremy I really enjoyed your identity statement, as it was very thorough and offered a lot of insight into your perspective of privacy and identity, and dropped some social commentary along with it. Personally, I'd name my son Tony Stark anyways!

What was really interesting here was how you injected your personal processes and thoughts regarding the steps you take to keep your data private in the online space. Instead of taking the search results at face value, you decided to dig deeper and use contextual information to make queries in a manner that would produce more precise results. Your diligence in seeking out your identity and information is commendable and speaks to your knowledge of how to search for this type of information online. The use of personal imagery is a nice touch, and makes the statement more compelling and relatable, giving readers a real-world visual view of your identity and not just words. Logically it flows, but without any real template for this style of writing, who would notice otherwise? I found myself caught up in reading the content. For a first draft, really well written and well done.