Talk:James Boisvert

Logan Niswander Comment: I think your autobiography is really solid overall. I found the way in which you detailed the progression of your views on privacy throughout the course of this assignment to be especially interesting. The fact that you had never searched yourself online to explore your own online identity made your perspective on this assignment particularly attention grabbing. I was, however, surprised to see that you did not discuss any sort of data broker report on yourself. This may have simply been because you opted out of having a report generated on yourself, but I do think it would be interesting to see what such a report would turn up considering your low profile online. One aspect of your autobiography that stuck out to me was your extensive discussion of in class material. By bringing Floridi into your autobiography and using quotes from him you really managed to tie the theme of everything nicely back to our discussions in class. I also liked the way that you talked about conversations you had with other classmates during discussion. By doing this you further legitimized your argument by showing that fellow students shared a similar perspective with you. One final area that I believe you could work on is your images. Adding a caption to each image and explaining what they represent and where you found them would help avoid any confusion surrounding their purpose.