Talk:Jack Zhang

Jack, I had a great time reading your avatar page. I felt like you took me through the development of your online identity quite well. The way you described what got you on Facebook for the first time really stuck with me. At our similar ages we saw the rise of Facebook, and with that we saw large portions of our peers on it. I can remember feeling the exact same way about Facebook. There is a feeling of fomo when you first see your peers on social media. I enjoyed the way you described your transition away from being active on Facebook. You brought up how the relationships you cared about suffered because of your Facebook usage, and I thought it was an excellent way to show a negative affect of the platform. It also showed me how your values changed as you used Facebook. I thought that your "Back to Square One?" section could be developed a little further. The section begs the question of how you feel after going through the cycle you describe. Is there anything that you miss about using Facebook? The tone I got from your writing felt largely negative about the social media, but I still interested to see what one would learn from checking out your profile today. Is it representative of your current self? I liked the second photo you have, but I thought the initial cover photo could be explained a bit. I was wondering what the cover photo was! Overall good job.

--Paulo Warren