Talk:Isabell Astor

Allyson Rosenzweig: Isabell - I enjoyed reading your post and the metaphor you portrayed. I think you did a great job adding a persona to your writing by acting like your own stalker and proving that if you wanted to stalk and find information about someone, you could very easily. Your article has a very ominous tone that reflects the topic you wrote on so I applaud you on that. I think you also do a good job tying in the readings with your piece. However, one suggestion I would tell you to make your writing even stronger would be to provide a contrast to your real life. How is what you found online and the method you took to stalk someone related to your actual relationships in real life - your neighbors in reality? And since you feel so strongly about this being a murder waiting to happen, how come we all agree to have online profiles and so absentmindedly create them without analyzing these consequences?