Talk:Internet of things
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Really nice start. Your writing is clear, and you incorporate outside material well. I would, however, like to see you frame your ethical discussion with course concepts. It could be made more clear to the reader what ties these ethical concerns together. I think grounding this more in course material could help provide a framework for the reader to use to think about your topic. The Ethics section would benefit from expansion and course material.
Elizabeth Whittaker