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| − | I really enjoyed reading your statement! This was a pretty comprehensive piece and I felt like your authentic voice and self-reflection came through. The beginning of your statement was particularly interesting when you talked about privacy that was imposed by your parents--I think this idea could potentially be carried throughout the entire piece and brought up when you talked about Instagram and Twitter. | + | I really enjoyed reading your statement! This was a pretty comprehensive piece and I felt like your authentic voice and self-reflection came through. The beginning of your statement was particularly interesting when you talked about privacy that was imposed by your parents--I think this idea could potentially be carried throughout the entire piece and be brought up when you talked about Instagram and Twitter as well. I also think that when you mention your birthday present being |
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Hi Hannah!
I really enjoyed reading your statement! This was a pretty comprehensive piece and I felt like your authentic voice and self-reflection came through. The beginning of your statement was particularly interesting when you talked about privacy that was imposed by your parents--I think this idea could potentially be carried throughout the entire piece and be brought up when you talked about Instagram and Twitter as well. I also think that when you mention your birthday present being
