Talk:Hannah Engelman

Comment: Kelsey Burns

Hi Hannah,

Great job finding information about yourself online! You do a great job comparing what information you were able to find about yourself online versus who the “real” you is. I especially appreciate your takeaways about your level of satisfaction with this information and that you’re not going to change your behaviors because of this research. I would like to hear more of your general takeaways after having collected all of your information. You make many great points throughout this piece of writing and I think a few extra sentences synthesizing your overall takeaway would better capture what you learned. You had really great logistics and train of thought throughout this. Great job!