Difference between revisions of "Talk:Hailey Isaacs"
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| − | I would like to see more introspective analysis in the beginning history of your Facebook, especially if you could comment on some deeper significance behind why you took so many photos in eighth grade compared to high school. I would also like to have known how genuine your Facebook account reflected the real "you" when you used it in middle school and high school. Another thing I would like to know more about is how your Facebook account reflects who you are in college now, especially since you have transitioned from using it heavily before to barely at all now. Finally, it would have been cool to see you elaborate on why you are different online compared to in real life where you are very open with sharing information. | + | This was a funny read! You did a great job of keeping my attention with your witty commentary. However, I would like to see more introspective analysis in the beginning history of your Facebook, especially if you could comment on some deeper significance behind why you took so many photos in eighth grade compared to high school. I would also like to have known how genuine your Facebook account reflected the real "you" when you used it in middle school and high school. Another thing I would like to know more about is how your Facebook account reflects who you are in college now, especially since you have transitioned from using it heavily before to barely at all now. Finally, it would have been cool to see you elaborate on why you are different online compared to in real life where you are very open with sharing information. |
I think your formatting is on point because I can follow your timeline and thoughts in a chronological order. There are some grammar mistakes here and there, so I would recommend combing through your page and fixing all of them. Overall, your avatar page was very entertaining to read, but I would just like to see more in-depth analysis of why and how you use social media as a reflection of yourself. | I think your formatting is on point because I can follow your timeline and thoughts in a chronological order. There are some grammar mistakes here and there, so I would recommend combing through your page and fixing all of them. Overall, your avatar page was very entertaining to read, but I would just like to see more in-depth analysis of why and how you use social media as a reflection of yourself. | ||
| − | Sincerely, | + | Sincerely,<br> |
George Lu | George Lu | ||
Revision as of 19:36, 25 March 2016
Hi Hailey,
This was a funny read! You did a great job of keeping my attention with your witty commentary. However, I would like to see more introspective analysis in the beginning history of your Facebook, especially if you could comment on some deeper significance behind why you took so many photos in eighth grade compared to high school. I would also like to have known how genuine your Facebook account reflected the real "you" when you used it in middle school and high school. Another thing I would like to know more about is how your Facebook account reflects who you are in college now, especially since you have transitioned from using it heavily before to barely at all now. Finally, it would have been cool to see you elaborate on why you are different online compared to in real life where you are very open with sharing information.
I think your formatting is on point because I can follow your timeline and thoughts in a chronological order. There are some grammar mistakes here and there, so I would recommend combing through your page and fixing all of them. Overall, your avatar page was very entertaining to read, but I would just like to see more in-depth analysis of why and how you use social media as a reflection of yourself.
Sincerely,
George Lu
Comment #2
Hey Hailey,
I'm doing the same as George-y boy here.
Best, Cecilia Ngo
