Talk:GitHub Copilot

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The article may be a bit long. Word counted almost 3,900 words, but some of those could be from formatting the article into Wikitext.

The article does contain a good introductory paragraph, followed by a navigational panel and then the body of the article. There is also a helpful image right next to the introductory paragraph. There is a good amount of information in the introductory paragraph, but I would try to either make it more cohesive or flow better as it currently reads like a list of facts. I would also try to clean up the grammar in the concluding sentence of the introduction. I also was thinking it would be helpful to briefly mention the popularity or amount of users that the program is getting in the introduction. The article has a very solid amount of references and is clearly very well researched.

The issue at stake is clear to me and it is mentioned in the introduction and then expanded upon in the rest of the article. The “Ethical issues” section of the article expands upon the nuances of the controversy related to the product. The larger umbrella of topics could be reorganized as the “Origin” topic is only one line but the “Ethical issues” topic is several hundred words. I would try to keep the topics more balanced and consider making the first few topics subtopics under some umbrella topic.

The article does maintain a neutral point of view throughout. Everything surround the controversies is cited and the author addresses multiple points of view without offering allowing their personal opinions to bleed into the article.

Good work!

-Isaiah