Talk:Gabrielle Carels

Hi Gabrielle,

I really like how you started off with the idea that your Facebook does not accurately represent all of you. Your honesty is there right from the beginning and it sets up your avatar page very nicely. I also appreciate that you very quickly laid out your use of Facebook in the first paragraph. Also, the fact that you separated the bulk of your discourse into a "reveal" section and a "hide" section really helped get across the point of your page.

While you covered a wide variety of the primary elements of you Facebook, I think you could have looked a little more at some of the secondary elements not mentioned. Some of the secondary elements were implicit based on your use of Facebook and I think you would have benefited from bringing a few of these ideas to the foreground.

With all that said, you had excellent photos, and your voice in the page was excellent for communicating your ideas. It was all tied together from start to finish with a clear message being put across. Great job!

Jad