Talk:Facebook Metaverse

1)Length: You are at about 350 words, and you need 3,000 words by next Friday.

2)Structure: From the time that I checked, there was really no opening paragraph. You have a good introduction to Facebook Messenger. Perhaps under Social Networking, you could also include Instagram, as a part of the social network under Facebook, now Meta. From your contents table, I believe that you have a good structure laid out in the plan. It is good that you are going to talk about the history of the Metaverse before you talk about the Oculus, and what the Metaverse is. Perhaps, when you talk about the Oculus, you could talk about what the Oculus is specifically in context to the Metaverse. Specifically, in context to your productivity section, I think you do a good job of introducing the different components of this in terms of what they are. I would suggest adding some information about how this productivity relates to the Metaverse, and what this may look like. However, I do think that may be a little tricky in terms of keeping a neutral point of view. I think you do a good job of first introducing what the Quest for Business is, and then go on to explain what Horizon Workrooms are, as the structure supports the flow of information within your article.

3) Clarity: In terms of the issue at stake, from the time that I am writing this review, it is unclear what the stake or ethical issues within your article are. However, based on your table of contents it seems that you will be talking about the privacy concerns, public perception, and employee perception in terms of ethical implications of the Facebook Metaverse. I think that you can write a lot about privacy concerns from a neutral point of view, and use references that are reliable. However, I do think it may be hard to find reputable information about employee perception regarding the topic of your article. I also think it may be a little tough to relay employee perception as a valid ethical dilemma in terms of the Facebook Metaverse. Perhaps you could talk about something along the lines of how many Facebook employees were leaving and how this can be an ethical implication by the implementation of Facebook's Metaverse.

4) Objective Reporting: his article reports on ethical issues/controversies objectively. It simply states the facts objectively and does not state personal opinions. The author is just describing the issue and not trying to argue why cryptocurrency mining is necessary or on the other hand why it’s bad.