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Well written Aziz, your expectations/thesis about your online presence were clearly articulated and, apparently, on the nose.  I found myself falling into a similar box of normality when writing my own data ID draft, and I found it a bit difficult to attempt to insert concepts from the course into the flow of writing.  Though it isn't explicitly mandatory to mention any of the authors we have read through this semester, it seems the examples (picked for quality) from the previous semesters include those kinds of textual references, so I would recommend tying some kind in, perhaps relating to your infosphere bit at the beginning – a concept I very much enjoy seeing.  Beyond this, if there ever is the possibility of creating references (hyperlinks to other wiki pages), then do so.  I neglected in doing this as well, but upon reflection, it makes sense to create links for words or concepts (such as infosphere) to their existing page. Cheers and well written.
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Well written Aziz, your expectations/thesis about your online presence were clearly articulated and, apparently, on the nose.  I found myself falling into a similar box of normality when writing my own data ID draft, and I found it a bit difficult to attempt to insert concepts from the course into the flow of writing.  Though it isn't explicitly mandatory to mention any of the authors we have read through this semester, it seems the examples (picked for quality) from the previous semesters include those kinds of textual references, so I would recommend tying some kind in, perhaps relating to your infosphere bit at the beginning – a concept I very much enjoy seeing.  Beyond this, if there ever is the possibility of creating references (hyperlinks to other wiki pages), then do so.  I neglected in doing this as well, but upon reflection, it makes sense to create links for words or concepts (such as infosphere) to their existing page. Cheers and well written. -Noah McGuire

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Well written Aziz, your expectations/thesis about your online presence were clearly articulated and, apparently, on the nose. I found myself falling into a similar box of normality when writing my own data ID draft, and I found it a bit difficult to attempt to insert concepts from the course into the flow of writing. Though it isn't explicitly mandatory to mention any of the authors we have read through this semester, it seems the examples (picked for quality) from the previous semesters include those kinds of textual references, so I would recommend tying some kind in, perhaps relating to your infosphere bit at the beginning – a concept I very much enjoy seeing. Beyond this, if there ever is the possibility of creating references (hyperlinks to other wiki pages), then do so. I neglected in doing this as well, but upon reflection, it makes sense to create links for words or concepts (such as infosphere) to their existing page. Cheers and well written. -Noah McGuire