Talk:Eric Monaghan
Peer Review 1
Your analysis of your Facebook profile shows that you’ve thought long and hard about your online identity in relation to your real life identity, seemingly before it was even brought up in this class. Your depth of analysis also shows through in your direct reference to the class readings, namely the Bashe article on the ethical acculturation model. You covered many of the main aspects of a Facebook profile, and did so with a perceptive eye. I like how you mentioned both how you view your page, and how another Facebook user might view your page. Despite the distance you seemingly portray in your Facebook profile, the reasoning behind most aspects of your page is surprisingly open (I consider this a good thing).
One critique I have is that you did not mention how your profile may have changed over time. While it’s possible, I find it hard to believe a person is that self-aware or critical throughout their entire duration on Facebook. Has your profile changed much since it was created?
- Marisa Lamberty
""Peer review 2""
Hey Eric, your autobiography was very well-thought out and open. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I feel as if I learned more from the writing style you chose to use rather than the actual content of the report, which seemed to be as modest and minute as possible. It was interesting how you drew a line between separation and integration. It seems you manage your profile expecting for strangers to peruse and judge. Whether it might not seem genuine to use facebook in a non integrated style, like you said the way you keep your profile is a personal preference aligned with your self-proclaimed introverted-ness.
You wrote in a very philosophical and analytical way, which is hard for a rube like me to get through, however that is only my personal preference and I'm sure it was an easier read for other more well-read people. You seemed to have thought this out very deeply and I'm impressed with how much content you wrote that was not just describing your facebook profile. Great job dude. I like skeletons and stuff too.
BSL Chris Liu
