Talk:Elise Whitney

Dominic Ralph: Elise I thought you did a great job staying on the prompt and not turning it into an autobiography. You managed to highlight where your online data identity did not match your own identity and say that you wished it included more. Possibly let us know exactly what you want it to include. A couple other quick points: 1.You say you do not agree with what Luciano Floridi calls your informational privacy. Elaborate on what he calls your informational privacy since the reader may not be familiar with Floridi. 2.You write the following sentence: "This does not mean that there is not ample information about me on the internet, though". Try rewording this; it messes with the flow of your paper. 3.Try and make pictures align better and possibly put captions underneath.