Talk:Edward Anderson

Ted, I thought your story telling was really captivating. I enjoyed the way you told us about your Facebook like a story. It was funny to hear that your sisters made your profile and locked you out. Having an older sister I could relate to your story. I enjoyed your progression of how you changed roles as a user Facebook such as how you did not have access to your account, to being an awkward poster, to being the bystander that you are today. I think there is plenty of truth to be told about how other social media grabs attention and focus on Facebook wanes.

There are a few areas to address that would make this work stronger. There were a few careless typos one of which was, “As I grew older it Facebook became more and”. This is minimal. was hoping that you would give great discussion on ethics. There is a lot you can say about the ethics behind operating another person’s Facebook and having access to their life. Do you think that your sister ‘liking’ her own things on her wall is unethical? You could expand your thoughts on your last paragraph. There is so much you can say about the artificial way you present yourself. Do you think that you focus on the story detracted from the analysis of ethical problems? These are a few questions to ask yourself about how to edit your avatar

-Great job overall! -Andrew