Talk:Drew Dyer

Hey Drew,

I really enjoyed reading your piece! I completely agree with how you laid out your wiki site, separating parts of your story through different phases you went through. I know for sure that my Facebook Avatar has changed a lot throughout the years. The phases that your Facebook Avatar went through were very similar to mine. Both of our profiles started off very open but became more selective when going through college and high school. Unfortunately, I am not 21 yet, so hopefully, my Facebook Avatar goes through the casual phase soon. In addition, it was nice that you compared your avatar from Facebook with MySpace through its customizability and how you would express yourself through that.

There were only a few things that I would fix after re-reading your piece. I feel that some of the primary and secondary elements titles could be more descriptive. Maybe you could make the individual titles under the headers more representative of the text written below it.

Best, William Juang