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I thought that your data identity statement was really well written and relates well to the concepts of anonymity and privacy on the internet. It was really interesting to read about how your family's affinity for technology helped you start creating your online identity when you were young, and then now when researching yourself you are starting to realize the consequences. I thought that your history with Facebook and Twitter were very relatable, I too made posts and comments when I was young that I didn't fully understand the permanence of. I thought that your lack of data broker data would seriously impact your ability to write a quality data identity statement, but your extensive research on Google and other search engines really made up for it. As Alan said, it definitely would benefit you to shrink your results section and broaden your conclusion section to write about what it means to you to find all this data online, and what you plan to do to control your online identity.
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- Harrison Crandall

Latest revision as of 17:59, 24 February 2020

Hi Dominic,

I enjoyed reading your overall post on your search for the digital footprint you had on the web. I could really relate to your initial paragraph as I didn't really realize the consequences of my Facebook postings when I was younger either. One suggestion I have is to shorten/condense your search results section and add more of what you plan to do in the future with your new knowledge about your digital self. It would be interesting to hear your thoughts on if you're going to try have a more online presence to promote your businesses or to lessen your presence by trying to clean up some posts.

Best,

Alan




Hi Dom,

I thought that your data identity statement was really well written and relates well to the concepts of anonymity and privacy on the internet. It was really interesting to read about how your family's affinity for technology helped you start creating your online identity when you were young, and then now when researching yourself you are starting to realize the consequences. I thought that your history with Facebook and Twitter were very relatable, I too made posts and comments when I was young that I didn't fully understand the permanence of. I thought that your lack of data broker data would seriously impact your ability to write a quality data identity statement, but your extensive research on Google and other search engines really made up for it. As Alan said, it definitely would benefit you to shrink your results section and broaden your conclusion section to write about what it means to you to find all this data online, and what you plan to do to control your online identity.

- Harrison Crandall