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I found this wiki page to start off very strong and grab my attention. It was interesting to start off by explaining all the things that were found when searched online. But one of the most intriguing aspects of this introduction was the fact that you spent time explaining why it is hard to find information about you online since your name is fairly common especially in a big city such as New York City. The tie back to data brokers being able to easily find more accurate information on you was a good way to connect this on a larger scale to privacy. I would have liked to read more about how this made you feel that if you were to pay for more information, there could be a lot more information found on you. The fact that you found this information online to not be an accurate representation of yourself is interesting and should be expanded on. In addition, there were several spelling errors. Overall, this was a good post, but I would love to read more in depth about how you felt about all of this online privacy. | I found this wiki page to start off very strong and grab my attention. It was interesting to start off by explaining all the things that were found when searched online. But one of the most intriguing aspects of this introduction was the fact that you spent time explaining why it is hard to find information about you online since your name is fairly common especially in a big city such as New York City. The tie back to data brokers being able to easily find more accurate information on you was a good way to connect this on a larger scale to privacy. I would have liked to read more about how this made you feel that if you were to pay for more information, there could be a lot more information found on you. The fact that you found this information online to not be an accurate representation of yourself is interesting and should be expanded on. In addition, there were several spelling errors. Overall, this was a good post, but I would love to read more in depth about how you felt about all of this online privacy. | ||
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Margot Siegel's Review of Will Godley's MediaWiki Article:
I found this wiki page to start off very strong and grab my attention. It was interesting to start off by explaining all the things that were found when searched online. But one of the most intriguing aspects of this introduction was the fact that you spent time explaining why it is hard to find information about you online since your name is fairly common especially in a big city such as New York City. The tie back to data brokers being able to easily find more accurate information on you was a good way to connect this on a larger scale to privacy. I would have liked to read more about how this made you feel that if you were to pay for more information, there could be a lot more information found on you. The fact that you found this information online to not be an accurate representation of yourself is interesting and should be expanded on. In addition, there were several spelling errors. Overall, this was a good post, but I would love to read more in depth about how you felt about all of this online privacy.
