Talk:David Forystek

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Pratik Goswami Comments:

After reading your data profile, I liked how your writing showed your interest in discovering your data profile, with every search and every hit on a data broker website you seemed to be getting more surprised and disturbed as you found out more and more information about you and your relatives, so the temporal aspect of your identity statement was written very well. However, maybe it’s just me, but I had trouble discerning the theme of your statement. If I had to guess it would be that: You were cautious with how you used the internet, however, you were shocked to see the amount of information that was found out about you. To enhance your statement, maybe talk about patterns that emerged as searched up your name. Did any of the people with the same name have anything else in common with you besides your name? Or was your name the only thing you had in common yet still were getting their information while you were trying to find your own? Talk about the ethicality of this and how much misinformation this could spread if someone really needed to background check you or look up your name. I myself was unable to find anything on myself on instant checkmate, but seems to me the website was able to unravel a bunch of information about you. Discuss why you think this is the case? Is it your name? Or some other reason that information about you was so much more readily available and accurate than the ones I found about myself. Overall, your identity statement is unique and interesting to read, but maybe just add more about the ethicality of the information found out about you and maybe tie in a couple sources from the weekly readings. And add 2 pictures.