Talk:Charlie Peng

James Li's Comment:

Hi Charlie,

I really enjoyed reading your data identity statement. I think some parts that you could improve are adding visuals like pictures to help enhance your data identity statement. Also, you should try to format your autobiography better by adding different sections, headers, and a table of contents. I recommend looking at other people's avatars to get an idea, or clicking edit to see how they formatted their sections. These 2 changes will help your data identity statement by making it more visually pleasing, easier on the eyes, and easier to read in general. Right now, it is one block essay, and because it isn't formatted, there is no cohesive narrative to follow either. Your data identity statement seems very stream of consciousness, which could work, but as of now it is just messy and confusing. I would put a high priority on improving formatting first, as the content is actually interesting and revealing. Another change that you could make is to come up with a more cohesive conclusion, as you don't end on any particularly strong statement. A conclusion would help you wrap up what you're saying and help the reader remember your key points. Overall, I enjoyed reading the actual content of your autobiography but I think you should change the formatting.