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−	I would recommend changing the format of your references to match with Wikipedia's style. In order to do this, insert the citation in your text whenever you reference an article (aka any place where an in-text citation would occur in an academic article). The format is : <ref>CITATION</ref>. For example, your first reference would be formatted as <ref>Cambridge Analytica. (n.d.). Retrieved March 13, 2019, from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cambridge_Analytica</ref>. I wanted to go in and do some for you to be helpful, but it is hard for me to be sure where you referenced each article. Hope this is clear!	+	I would recommend changing the format of your references to match with Wikipedia's style. In order to do this, insert the citation in your text whenever you reference an article (aka any place where an in-text citation would occur in an academic article). The format is : <ref>CITATION</ref>. For example, your first reference would be formatted as <ref>Cambridge Analytica. (n.d.). Retrieved March 13, 2019, from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cambridge_Analytica</ref>. I wanted to go in and do some for you to be helpful, but it is hard for me to be sure where you referenced each article. Hope this is clear! ...also I just realized that the examples just became actual citations which can be confusing to read. Click on "edit" to read this comment so that it will make more sense.

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This is a good start. You should move your "Introduction" section to above your contents box. Also, I'd like to see more course content about ethics involved. You get into what some of the ethical concerns are, I think course material could help provide a framework for the reader to use to think about them.

Elizabeth Whittaker

Comment by Flannery O'Donnell:

I would recommend changing the format of your references to match with Wikipedia's style. In order to do this, insert the citation in your text whenever you reference an article (aka any place where an in-text citation would occur in an academic article). The format is : ^[1]. For example, your first reference would be formatted as ^[2]. I wanted to go in and do some for you to be helpful, but it is hard for me to be sure where you referenced each article. Hope this is clear! ...also I just realized that the examples just became actual citations which can be confusing to read. Click on "edit" to read this comment so that it will make more sense.

1. ↑ CITATION
2. ↑ Cambridge Analytica. (n.d.). Retrieved March 13, 2019, from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cambridge_Analytica