Talk:Bryce Smith

Brady Hicks

I thought this was a well written, in-depth analysis of your online profile, or rather, lack of one. I liked the way you presented your reasoning behind why you didn't think you'd have a big presence online, and your explanation of who your online profile would represent. One thing worth looking into is that at the beginning, you say you expected to find an inaccurate representation of yourself, but you never come back to that point to say if it was inaccurate. I know you said you're cautious about what you put online, but it would be interesting to see how your online profile compares to the real you. Another thing that might be helpful is including some thoughts from the authors of our in-class readings as discussion points maybe discussing benefits and drawbacks of not having an online profile. There were also a few grammatical errors throughout, so I recommend just reading over it again and you'll catch them. Overall though, I thought it was well done.