Talk:Brady Hicks

Jay Dayal

I think that this was well written and broken down in a way that makes sense. I like how you included sections about what the data brokers said about you and then what Google says. I also liked how you include a direct quote from Floridi to support why you believe that there is less information about you now than before when you were in high school. I think one place that you can improve upon is including more information about who you are so the reader knows what Google and data brokers are missing. Maybe you can also talk about why your relatives are showing up but not you. Another thing I think you can spend more time talking about is the information that comes up but is not true. You touched upon this briefly but you could go more in-depth and talk about why it came up and if there is anything in your life that may have prompted that to come up.